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		<title>Comment on The Touch of a Wild Animal by Jenni</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/22/the-touch-of-a-wild-animal/#comment-1442</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jenni]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 May 2013 05:17:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am sorry you had to deal with it, but maybe better you than Art!! But I am also glad for the deer that you and Sabrina were there for it. People like you and her show he rest of us that there are still people among us who care. 
I know you are not religious and I am not much either but this came to my mind, &quot;God bless you&quot;. I dont know any equivalent for that.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am sorry you had to deal with it, but maybe better you than Art!! But I am also glad for the deer that you and Sabrina were there for it. People like you and her show he rest of us that there are still people among us who care.<br />
I know you are not religious and I am not much either but this came to my mind, &#8220;God bless you&#8221;. I dont know any equivalent for that.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Touch of a Wild Animal by Lisa</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/22/the-touch-of-a-wild-animal/#comment-1441</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 May 2013 04:46:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you Pat. ]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you Pat. </p>
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		<title>Comment on The Touch of a Wild Animal by Pat Larson</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/22/the-touch-of-a-wild-animal/#comment-1440</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Pat Larson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 May 2013 04:23:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Beautiful.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Beautiful.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Wild Book Review by Lisa</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/14/wild-book-review/#comment-1438</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 May 2013 03:02:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[There is a very brutal scene with a horse towards the end and I&#039;m still not sure why it had to be there in such detail. If you read other reviews of the book you&#039;ll see a broad range between those who love the book and those who didn&#039;t. It might be worth reading simply because the book seems to polarize its readers. I&#039;d love to hear what you think of it when you&#039;re done.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There is a very brutal scene with a horse towards the end and I&#8217;m still not sure why it had to be there in such detail. If you read other reviews of the book you&#8217;ll see a broad range between those who love the book and those who didn&#8217;t. It might be worth reading simply because the book seems to polarize its readers. I&#8217;d love to hear what you think of it when you&#8217;re done.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Wild Book Review by Shary Hover</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/14/wild-book-review/#comment-1435</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Shary Hover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 May 2013 14:59:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I loved A Walk in the Woods and had been looking forward to Strayed, because there&#039;s been so much buzz about it. Now I&#039;m a little nervous, not because of the navel gazing so much, but because I hate ugly scenes with animals. I&#039;ll probably still read it, but I&#039;ll be on the lookout for that section and I might try to skip over it.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved A Walk in the Woods and had been looking forward to Strayed, because there&#8217;s been so much buzz about it. Now I&#8217;m a little nervous, not because of the navel gazing so much, but because I hate ugly scenes with animals. I&#8217;ll probably still read it, but I&#8217;ll be on the lookout for that section and I might try to skip over it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Press This by Lisa</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/12/press-this/#comment-1433</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2013 20:52:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Validation is exactly the word I was looking for. I crave the same thing. 

Marketing is a big problem for indie authors only because it takes so much time. But there are ways to make that work, and one thing I&#039;m finding is that word of mouth seems to work better than anything else. Plus, there doesn&#039;t seem to be any reason to put effort into marketing the first book. Well, depending on genre I guess. For example, mystery readers like to see series, so marketing pays off there, if you have more than one book out. I know one author friend also hired a marketing business. Of course then you have money going out before much comes in.

But other than the validation of having someone &#039;big&#039; say your story is worthy of their time, I do like the complete control that comes with doing it myself.

Reminds me of a woman who put together an art festival and told me only artists who would be in museums twenty years from now could display their work. I asked her how the board knew who would be in a museum in the future and she said &#039;I decide&#039;. So maybe, even with large publishers, it&#039;s all arbitrary anyway.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Validation is exactly the word I was looking for. I crave the same thing. </p>
<p>Marketing is a big problem for indie authors only because it takes so much time. But there are ways to make that work, and one thing I&#8217;m finding is that word of mouth seems to work better than anything else. Plus, there doesn&#8217;t seem to be any reason to put effort into marketing the first book. Well, depending on genre I guess. For example, mystery readers like to see series, so marketing pays off there, if you have more than one book out. I know one author friend also hired a marketing business. Of course then you have money going out before much comes in.</p>
<p>But other than the validation of having someone &#8216;big&#8217; say your story is worthy of their time, I do like the complete control that comes with doing it myself.</p>
<p>Reminds me of a woman who put together an art festival and told me only artists who would be in museums twenty years from now could display their work. I asked her how the board knew who would be in a museum in the future and she said &#8216;I decide&#8217;. So maybe, even with large publishers, it&#8217;s all arbitrary anyway.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Press This by Shary Hover</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/05/12/press-this/#comment-1431</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Shary Hover]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2013 13:51:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I think you&#039;re right that there&#039;s a huge generational component to how writers feel about self-publishing and all of the variations on that theme. There was a time I&#039;d never have considered it, but now it seems like a possibility. There are two things that hold me back.

One is that I&#039;m looking for validation from a publisher. I think I need someone to say, &quot;Yes, this is a good story and I can sell it.&quot;

The other is that I don&#039;t know much about marketing except that it&#039;s a lot of work. If I were to self-publish, I&#039;d have to learn every part of the business and do it myself. I know authors who work with established publishers have to do most of their own promotion these days, but I still think I&#039;d like an experienced partner to guide me should I ever get to that point with my writing.

I admire anyone who has the gumption to plunge in to the publishing world to get her words out there.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think you&#8217;re right that there&#8217;s a huge generational component to how writers feel about self-publishing and all of the variations on that theme. There was a time I&#8217;d never have considered it, but now it seems like a possibility. There are two things that hold me back.</p>
<p>One is that I&#8217;m looking for validation from a publisher. I think I need someone to say, &#8220;Yes, this is a good story and I can sell it.&#8221;</p>
<p>The other is that I don&#8217;t know much about marketing except that it&#8217;s a lot of work. If I were to self-publish, I&#8217;d have to learn every part of the business and do it myself. I know authors who work with established publishers have to do most of their own promotion these days, but I still think I&#8217;d like an experienced partner to guide me should I ever get to that point with my writing.</p>
<p>I admire anyone who has the gumption to plunge in to the publishing world to get her words out there.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guilt by Lisa</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/04/27/guilt/#comment-1427</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Apr 2013 04:34:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You and Jenni both bring up another side of the guilt coin. That if we don&#039;t take those moments to write down what is trying to come through us, then it&#039;s lost and won&#039;t return. Our stories and words and poems just move on to someone who cares enough to give them time. So in a way, we have a responsibility to those words. I see your question above, &#039;Am I worth the time&#039; and I want to hug you and say of course you are! You&#039;re so worth the time! And then I find myself thinking, why don&#039;t I tell myself that? Or believe it? Still a work in progress. And hey, I didn&#039;t do the dishes tonight, either.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You and Jenni both bring up another side of the guilt coin. That if we don&#8217;t take those moments to write down what is trying to come through us, then it&#8217;s lost and won&#8217;t return. Our stories and words and poems just move on to someone who cares enough to give them time. So in a way, we have a responsibility to those words. I see your question above, &#8216;Am I worth the time&#8217; and I want to hug you and say of course you are! You&#8217;re so worth the time! And then I find myself thinking, why don&#8217;t I tell myself that? Or believe it? Still a work in progress. And hey, I didn&#8217;t do the dishes tonight, either.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guilt by Lisa</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/04/27/guilt/#comment-1426</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Apr 2013 04:30:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Gibbs slap received. Here&#039;s how I handled the guilt today. I cleaned in the cabin. I got my writing desk all set up and ready. I even put an end table next to it, got the candles and lanterns in place, and my cast iron coasters. Note the plural. Because I put a rocking chair on the other side of the table so we can sit with tea and talk about writing. The rocking chair and cats await. (I also figure when you come down we can put the floor in...)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gibbs slap received. Here&#8217;s how I handled the guilt today. I cleaned in the cabin. I got my writing desk all set up and ready. I even put an end table next to it, got the candles and lanterns in place, and my cast iron coasters. Note the plural. Because I put a rocking chair on the other side of the table so we can sit with tea and talk about writing. The rocking chair and cats await. (I also figure when you come down we can put the floor in&#8230;)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guilt by Lisa</title>
		<link>http://thestoryriver.com/2013/04/27/guilt/#comment-1425</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lisa]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Apr 2013 04:27:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh, I didn&#039;t even get into all the guilt when I don&#039;t write! As you said, we can&#039;t win. We need to come up with some sort of mental ear plugs to drown out that voice of guilt. My son has started coming up to me when I&#039;m in the midst of chores and telling me to go write. And then of course I can justify doing so because my son wants me to. The silly mental games we play.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, I didn&#8217;t even get into all the guilt when I don&#8217;t write! As you said, we can&#8217;t win. We need to come up with some sort of mental ear plugs to drown out that voice of guilt. My son has started coming up to me when I&#8217;m in the midst of chores and telling me to go write. And then of course I can justify doing so because my son wants me to. The silly mental games we play.</p>
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